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Ramsha Afzal Journal entry #7: Final reflection: Writing in the Sciences                Writing in the Sciences immensely improved my writing skills from start to finish. The papers gradually became more complex and helped me improve my writing in all the different types of essays we explored throughout the class. I have always struggled trying to find a good thesis statement that is debatable and strong enough to prove my point. This class helped me improve my ability to write an effective thesis statement that introduces my topic clearly and is debatable. Writing multiple drafts before submitting my final made me realize how effective drafts are. Drafts prevented me from overthinking and helped me outline and organize my information in a more effective way. Revising each essay has made me a more cautious and a stronger writer because I have overcome many of the weak writing skills I had when I entere...

Afzal 1 Ramsha Afzal Abstract                    Obesity is defined as an abnormal or excessive fat accumulation that presents a risk to health. People affected with obesity in their childhood years puts them at a higher risk for being obese throughout their life. Obesity should be prevented in childhood years to prevent long term effects and reduce the risk of obesity throughout one's life. Obesity affects people in childhood the worst because it's the hardest to fix. If there is more awareness of obesity and people start to control their obesity specifically in childhood, many people will be safe from developing the many risks that come along with it in the future.             Afzal 2 Professor Matyakubova English 21003 Research Proposal 24 October 2015           ...